homework

Hello there Ji Yeon! ^^

Thank you very much for doing our homework and doing great sentences.

I really appreciate your effort.

I think sometimes, we have to consider the opinions of older and more experienced people.

It\'s because they\'ve been through the situation we are currently facing and they most likely know what to do.

Anyhow, that is just my opinion regarding this matter.

Don\'t worry. Our essays are opinionated so there is no wrong answer. :)

I hope you\'re doing great.

I\'ll see you again on Friday. ^_^

~Teacher Charry

If people make decisions, Once they are to be more neutral and impartial, that is not bad.

>> [Do you mean]: If people make decisions, they have to be more neutral and impartial.

But It’s difficult we are do something without emotion.

>> But it’s difficult to do something without emotions.
Science is another part.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Science is another aspect that we need to consider.

It needs to be objective. 

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It has to be objective. 
Because science is not a discussion is to be arrange of evidence. 

>> [Do you mean]: It\'s because science is not a discussion where evidences could be arranged.  
Through it, we can earn the result.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We can earn the result through this.
I think we consider when we are more objective.

>> [Do you mean]: I think it is easier to consider things when we are more objective.
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Hello Charry ~~
>> Hello, Charry! :)
It is hard homework. 

>> It is a hard/difficult homework. 
I can not handle it.

>> I cannot handle it.
And I\'m sorry that I couldn\'t do homework recently.

>> And I\'m sorry that I couldn\'t do our homework recently.
I tried to do my homework but a little bit slowly^^

>> I tried to do my homework but I\'m a little slow in doing it.

OR >> I tried to do my homework but I\'m a bit slow in doing it.