Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Goad me to eat something you really want today.
Be as persuasive as you can.
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First of all, I will say the taste of the food what I thought.
The taste of the food is sweet and soft.
So I think that the food what I want to eat is also good for you.
The 2nd thing is the price.
The price of the food is very cheap so we don't spend a lot of money.
It means we can save moneys for something to eat.
The 3rd thing is the location.
The store is located in the easy place to go by car.
The store has big spaces for parking.
So we cannot worry about the parking.
That kind of reasons I can recommend the food.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for making this well-made list, James!
Now I wonder what the food is exactly. It must be delicious! I can tell.
You have earned so many \"correct\" marks again. Collect more, my friend!
Keep writing and keep blowing my mind away.
Once again, a bunch of thanks!
Stay safe and warm.
-Klein-
Goad me to eat something you really want today.Be as persuasive as you can.==> First of all, I will say the taste of the food what I thought.
>>First of all, I will tell you about the taste of the food that I am thinking about.The taste of the food is sweet and soft. So I think that the food what I want to eat is also good for you.>>The taste of the food is sweet and the texture is soft, so I think this food I want to eat is also good for you.The 2nd thing is the price.
>>CorrectThe price of the food is very cheap so we don\'t spend a lot of money.
>>CorrectIt means we can save moneys for something to eat.>>It means we can save so much money for something to eat.The 3rd thing is the location.
>>CorrectThe store is located in the easy place to go by car.
>>Correct The store has big spaces for parking.So we cannot worry about the parking.>>The store has a wide space for parking, so we won\'t worry about it.That kind of reasons I can recommend the food.
>>Those reasons are the ones I recommend for choosing the food.
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