Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Lee!
Wow! You rephrased your sentence. ^^
And you used the words in only one sentence.
Great job!
I think you need to put the article \"a\" before \"long time\".
Have a great weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
If you focus on how to enrapture your boss, you will be promoted to the superb place which you wanted for long time.
>> If you focus on how to enrapture your boss, you will be promoted to the superb place which you wanted for a long time.
If you wanted to be promoted to the superb place which you wanted for long time, you should focus on how to enrapture your boss.
>> If you wanted to be promoted to the superb place which you wanted for a long time, you should focus on how to enrapture your boss.
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