Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you find it gratifying when you are able to help someone in the hole?
Have you done it before?
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Before composition,I always thank you for your comment about our class.
It is very helpful for me to improve my English skill.
I am a lucky guy to meet you.
Although my English speaking is poor, you always send me a smile and try to give me confidence about speaking and writing.
Return to the homework, I feel gratifying when I help someone in the hole.
But if I have an ability to solve their money problem, I will check his or her mind at first. If there is a value that kind of action, I will do and don't hesitate.
But as you know I am not a rich man,so I don't have experience about it.
강사 첨삭
Your words are truly moving, James!
THANK YOU!
I hope that you get to learn something eat time we talk. Please be patient. And more importantly, stay confident. All your efforts will pay off sooner or later, my friend. Hold on to your motivation. I will definitely help you the best way I can.
Let\'s do our best!
Also, stay kind and modest.
For sure, many of your friends will help you anytime you need them.
Until our next chat, James!
Regards to your family!
-Klein-
Do you find it gratifying when you are able to help someone in the hole?Have you done it before?==> Before composition,I always thank you for your comment about our class.
>>Before the composition, I always thank you for your comment about our class.It is very helpful for me to improve my English skill.
>>CorrectI am a lucky guy to meet you.
>>CorrectAlthough my English speaking is poor, you always send me a smile and try to give me confidence about speaking and writing.>>Correct
OR >> Although my English is poor, you always give me a smile and try to give me confidence about speaking and writing.Return to the homework, I feel gratifying when I help someone in the hole.
>>Going back to the homework, it is gratifying when I help someone in the hole.But if I have an ability to solve their money problem, I will check his or her mind at first.
>>But if I have the ability to solve their money problem, I will check their mind first.
>>But if I have the ability to solve his or her money problem, I will check his or her mind first.
If there is a value that kind of action, I will do and don\'t hesitate. >>If there is value to that kind of action, I will do it without hesitation.
>>If there is value to that kind of action, I don\'t hesitate to do it.
But as you know I am not a rich man,so I don\'t have experience about it.
>>But as you know I am not a rich man, so I don\'t have that experience.
>>But as you know I am not a rich man, so I haven\'t experienced that.
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