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I am so interested in Korean traditional cultures.
I hope you could tell me more about them.
Thanks for this.
~Teacher Shanee^^
What Korean cultures do you think should foreigners learn before going to your country?
Every contry has their own traditional culture.
>>> Every country has their own traditional culture.
But I guess Korea has a special culture.
Koreans have a special feeling \"Jung\".
>>> Correct!
It is a kind of kindess but it is a little differen from it.
>>> It is a kind of kindness but it is a little different from it.
For example, Koreans like to share the food with many people and likes to ask others eat.
>>> For example, Koreans like to share food with many people and ask other to eat.
And also, Koreans like to drink togather.
>>> And also, Koreans like to drink together.
We pour alcohol(sojoo)to the other people.
>>> We offer and pour alcohol [sojoo] to other people.
Sometimes Korean could share their own glass to drink.
>>> Sometimes Koreans could share their own glass.
Now a days, many Koreans avoid to share the glasses but elderies could do it.
>>> Nowadays, many Koreans avoid to share their glasses but the elders still do it.
Lastly, Koreans like to help foreigners so don\'t be afraid to talk to Koreans.
>>> Correct!
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