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2017-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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What Korean cultures do you think should foreigners learn before going to your country? Every contry has their own traditional culture. But I guess Korea has a special culture. Koreans have a special feeling "Jung". It is a kind of kindess but it is a little differen from it. For example, Koreans like to share the food with many people and likes to ask others eat. And also, Koreans like to drink togather. We pour alcohol(sojoo)to the other people. Sometimes Korean could share their own glass to drink. Now a days, many Koreans avoid to share the glasses but elderies could do it. Lastly, Koreans like to help foreigners so don't be afraid to talk to Koreans.

강사 첨삭

I am so interested in Korean traditional cultures.

I hope you could tell me more about them.

Thanks for this.

~Teacher Shanee^^


What Korean cultures do you think should foreigners learn before going to your country?

Every contry has their own traditional culture.

>>> Every country has their own traditional culture.

But I guess Korea has a special culture.
Koreans have a special feeling \"Jung\".

>>> Correct!

It is a kind of kindess but it is a little differen from it.

>>> It is a kind of kindness but it is a little different from it.

For example, Koreans like to share the food with many people and likes to ask others eat.

>>> For example, Koreans like to share food with many people and ask other to eat.

And also, Koreans like to drink togather.

>>> And also, Koreans like to drink together.

We pour alcohol(sojoo)to the other people.

>>> We offer and pour alcohol [sojoo] to other people.

Sometimes Korean could share their own glass to drink.

>>> Sometimes Koreans could share their own glass.

Now a days, many Koreans avoid to share the glasses but elderies could do it.

>>> Nowadays, many Koreans avoid to share their glasses but the elders still do it.
 Lastly, Koreans like to help foreigners so don\'t be afraid to talk to Koreans.

>>> Correct!

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