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2017-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Are you gregarious all the time? ==> I am not a gregarious person but a introvert person. But I have to work in the company, I always try to change my character to gregarious. As a result of my effort, sometimes I become gregarious. Are you always a bright spark? ==> I'm not always a bright spark but I try to be a bright spark during my life especially in the work. If I become a intelligent person, I will finish my work smartly and easily. After finished my work by my talent, I will enjoy free time.

강사 첨삭

Greetings!
How\'s it going, James?
Thank you for finishing your homework real early. I am happy to read this today.
You may not be as gregarious as you want to be and not yet totally a bright spark but you\'ll get there somehow, my friend.
Do not be too hard on yourself.
Remember that if there is anything I can help you with, just let me know.
Never hesitate!
Enjoy the rest of your time with your family!
Until our next chat, James.
-Klein-
Are you gregarious all the time?
==>
I am not a gregarious person but a introvert person.
>>I am not a gregarious person but an introvert.
>>I am not gregarious but introverted.
But I have to work in the company, I always try to change my character to gregarious.
>>But I have to work in the company, so I always try to chance my character to gregarious.
As a result of my effort, sometimes I become gregarious.
>>Correct!
Are you always a bright spark?
==>
I\'m not always a bright spark but I try to be a bright spark during my life especially in the work.
>>I\'m not always a bright spark but I try to be one especially at work.
If I become a intelligent person, I will finish my work smartly and easily.
>>Correct!
After finished my work by my talent, I will enjoy free time.
>>After finishing my work with my talent, I will enjoy my free time.

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