HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, sir [이름]! ^.^
It\'s good to hear from you again.
Thanks for taking the time to do your homework today,
Good job. ^.^
It\'s good to know that you feel satisfied with your life.
A lot of people do no feel satisfied with what they have and they tend to want a lot of things.
And it\'s true that we should not get too comfortable with our life and always try our best to strive harder.
Let\'s get the most out of life! ^.^
Are you excited to go back home? :D
I hope to see you in class tomorrow.
Have a good night! ^_^
--- Teacher Jacey ^_^
My life is quite a successful but I\'m not feeling satisfied for my whole life.
>> My life is quite a success but I\'m not feeling satisfied with my whole life.
>> OR : I can consider my life a successful one but I\'m not really satisfied with everything.
I\'m put to feel inconvenience for my last life that it was about the moment when I didn\'t do my best at the moments.
>> I feel inconvenient about a certain time in my life because it was at those times that I didn\'t do my best.
I\'m satisfying for my life, thought I have argue whit my wife but I have a happy family sometimes.
>> I feel satisfied with my life. Although I argue with my wife sometimes, I can say I have a happy family.
>> OR : I am satisfied with my life. Although there are those times that I argue with my wife, I can say I have a happy family.
My children are growing up without some important sick and they are trying to study hard to improve there life.
>> My children are growing up and they are trying to study hard to improve their lives.
Though I don\'t enough, I don\'t have a big problem for my household economy.
>> Though I don\'t earn enough money, I don\'t encounter big problems about household economy.
If we enjoy only these moments, we will be happy and then our life is going to feel successful but we should understand that if we keep the position without improvement, maybe we will meet to our future something has wrong.
>> If we enjoy these moments, we will be happy and our life is going to feel successful. But, we should not get too much comfortable with what we have now and instead we should continue improving because something might go wrong in the future.
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