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2017-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Summer

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The animal hospital? It's somewhere ________ that big blue building. a) around b) about c) on -> a) 2. She's the kind of girl who knows everything ________ everyone. a) about b) on c) in -> a) 3. She is, ________ a doubt, the best student in the class. a) outside b) without c) about -> b) 4. ________ our visit to Japan, we saw a lot of interesting places. a) While b) During c) Through -> b) 5. ________ the year, I've spoken to her five times. a) In b) During c) Throughout -> c) I sometimes have time for self-reflection, when I did something wrong. I deeply regret what I did. I think about new idea what I will do if I'm in a same situation. When I was middle school student, I had a fight with my best friend, because my word that I was only kidding, hurt her mind. I was so sad because I didn't mean it,and thought "I should not have said such a word." Next day, I asked her forgiveness for my mistake, and she understood how I feel. She also said how she was sorry for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. You got everything right again. Congratulations! You are a very brave woman! Not everybody can ask forgiveness from someone they offended. Keep it up.^^ Bye! Bye!

T. Summer^^

1. The animal hospital? It\'s somewhere ________ that big blue
building.
a) around b) about c) on
-> a)

>> Correct

 2. She\'s the kind of girl who knows everything ________ everyone.
a) about b) on c) in
-> a)

>> Correct

 3. She is, ________ a doubt, the best student in the class.
a) outside b) without c) about
-> b)

>> Correct

 4. ________ our visit to Japan, we saw a lot of interesting places.
a) While b) During c) Through
-> b)
>> Correct


 5. ________ the year, I\'ve spoken to her five times.
a) In b) During c) Throughout
-> c)
>> Correct
I sometimes have time for self-reflection, when I did something wrong.

>> Sometimes, I have time for self-reflection when I did something wrong.
 I deeply regret what I did.

>> Correct

>> I feel bad about what I did.
 I think about new idea what I will do if I\'m in a same situation.

>> I will think about a new solution if the same situation happens again.
 When I was middle school student, I had a fight with my best friend, because my word that I was only kidding, hurt her mind.

>> When I was a middle school student, I had a fight with my best friend because I joked about her and my words hurt her feelings.
 I was so sad because I didn\'t mean it,and thought \"I should not have said such a word.\"

>> I was so sad because I didn\'t mean it and I thought to myself,\" I should not have said such a word.
 Next day, I asked her forgiveness for my mistake, and she understood how I feel.

>> The next day, I asked her forgiveness for my mistake and she understood how I felt.
 She also said how she was sorry for me.

>> She also told me how she felt sorry for me.


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