homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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1. The animal hospital? It\'s somewhere ________ that big blue
building.
a) around b) about c) on
-> a)
>> Correct
2. She\'s the kind of girl who knows everything ________ everyone.
a) about b) on c) in
-> a)
>> Correct
3. She is, ________ a doubt, the best student in the class.
a) outside b) without c) about
-> b)
>> Correct
4. ________ our visit to Japan, we saw a lot of interesting places.
a) While b) During c) Through
-> b)
>> Correct
5. ________ the year, I\'ve spoken to her five times.
a) In b) During c) Throughout
-> c)
>> Correct
I sometimes have time for self-reflection, when I did something wrong.
>> Sometimes, I have time for self-reflection when I did something wrong.
I deeply regret what I did.
>> Correct
>> I feel bad about what I did.
I think about new idea what I will do if I\'m in a same situation.
>> I will think about a new solution if the same situation happens again.
When I was middle school student, I had a fight with my best friend, because my word that I was only kidding, hurt her mind.
>> When I was a middle school student, I had a fight with my best friend because I joked about her and my words hurt her feelings.
I was so sad because I didn\'t mean it,and thought \"I should not have said such a word.\"
>> I was so sad because I didn\'t mean it and I thought to myself,\" I should not have said such a word.
Next day, I asked her forgiveness for my mistake, and she understood how I feel.
>> The next day, I asked her forgiveness for my mistake and she understood how I felt.
She also said how she was sorry for me.
>> She also told me how she felt sorry for me.
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