Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What tips could you suggest to start the ball rolling?
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At first, you have to clear the purpose of what you want to do.
It can reduce the failure when you start.
And you have to get some information to start the ball rolling.
It makes you to start more easily.
Also it is important you to get confidence when you start the ball rolling.
It will make a good chance to you.
강사 첨삭
You sure know how to keep the ball rolling, James! Thank you very much.
I guess for us, we will never run out of topics. If I forget something, I know that you are there to back me up. This is how communication works. It is never a one-way lane. There\'s always interaction, which is what we always have. I ought to thank you for this! Such can never be achieved if not for your utmost participation. Once more, THANK YOU!
I hope that you learned some words and expressions again.
Until the next one, my friend!
Keep safe and sound! Also, all the best in your meetings.
Best regards,
-Klein-
What tips could you suggest to start the ball rolling? ==>At first, you have to clear the purpose of what you want to do.
>>CorrectIt can reduce the failure when you start. >>CorrectAnd you have to get some information to start the ball rolling.
>>CorrectIt makes you to start more easily. >>CorrectAlso it is important you to get confidence when you start the ball rolling.
>>Correct
OR >> Also it is important to have confidence when you start the ball rolling.It will make a good chance to you.
>>It will make a good chance for you.
>>It would be a good chance for you.
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