Homework

Dear [이름],

A terrific Tuesday to you! ^.^

To start, I would like to say thank you.

Thank you for making your composition and sharing your ideas with me through writing.

Anyway, don\'t forget to read the corrections and suggestion below.

Happy reading! ^^

See you in a bit! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

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I think one of the biggest reasons that why people attend college is for their career preparation.

>> I think one of the biggest reasons that is why people attend college is for career preparation.

These days are so hard to get a job, and everyone has bachelor\'s degree, so people go to college.

>> These days, it is so hard to get a job, and everyone has a bachelor\'s degree, so people go to college.

But there are still a lot of people who are in college for increased their knowledge too!

>> However, there are still a lot of people who go to college to gain knowledge!

I think it dosen\'t matter why they attend to college is.

>> I think it doesn\'t matter why they attend to college.

Important thing is how meaningful they spend their time in college. XD

>> The important thing is how meaningful they spend their time in college.

>> OR: What\'s important is how they spend their time in college.