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2017-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Are you sporty with money? ==> I am trying to live economically. Because I am company worker, so I don't earn a lot of money. My salary is fixed and I have to use the money for my children. As you know, I will retire within a few years, so I have to save money for that. If I have a lot of money, I will be sporty with money and I will do use money freely.

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I can hear you uttering these words, James. Thank you for sharing! How I wish I can help you earn more money. Nonetheless, I know that you can do it. You\'ve been through tougher times, so I know that you will be just fine. Thank you for disclosing this to me. Aha! I remember you told me your son would help you. These are really good sentences! I am so happy! Once more, thank you! Have a great time, James. HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR! -Klein- Are you sporty with money?==>I am trying to live economically. Because I am company worker, so I don\'t earn a lot of money. >> Correct OR >> I am trying to live economically, because I am a company worker who doesn\'t earn a lot of money.My salary is fixed and I have to use the money for my children.>> Correct OR >> My salary is fixed, which I have to use for my children only. As you know, I will retire within a few years, so I have to save money for that.>> CorrectIf I have a lot of money, I will be sporty with money and I will do use money freely. >> If I have a lot of money, I will be sporty with it and use it freely.

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