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2017-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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1. Once upon a time there were three little pigs who wanted to see the world. When the they left home, their mum gave them some advice: Whatever you do, do it the best you can. 2. So the three pigs wandered through the world and were the happiest pigs you've ever seen. 3. They were playing fun games all summer long, but then came autumn and each pig wanted to build a house. 4. The first pig was not only the smalliest but also the laziest of the pigs. 5. He quickly built a house out of straw. 6. The second pig made his house out of wood which was a bit difficult than building a straw house. 7. The third pig followed his mum's advice and built a strong house out of bricks, which was the difficultiest house to build. 8. The pig worked very hard but finally got his house ready before winter. 9. During the cold winter months, the three little pigs lived extremely well in their houses. 10. They regularly visited one another and had the and had the wonderful time of their lives.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again!

I checked your homework and made the necessary corrections.

Thanks a lot Miss [이름]. See you later.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


1. Once upon a time there were three little pigs who wanted to see the world. When the they left home, their mum gave them some advice: Whatever you do, do it the best you can.
>>> Correct!
2. So the three pigs wandered through the world and were the happiest pigs you\'ve ever seen.
>>> Correct!
3. They were playing fun games all summer long, but then came autumn and each pig wanted to build a house.
>>> funny
4. The first pig was not only the smalliest but also the laziest of the pigs.
>>> smallest
5. He quickly built a house out of straw.
>>> Correct!
6. The second pig made his house out of wood which was a bit difficult than building a straw house.
>>> more difficult
7. The third pig followed his mum\'s advice and built a strong house out of bricks, which was the difficultiest house to build.
>>> most difficult
8. The pig worked very hard but finally got his house ready before winter.
>>> Correct!
9. During the cold winter months, the three little pigs lived extremely well in their houses.
>>> Correct!
10. They regularly visited one another and had the and had the wonderful time of their lives.

>>> most wonderful

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