Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that preparing food is easier than past is the result of the change of the lifestyle.
People have to move faster because of the fastness of processing velocity.
Therefore, instant food that can be prepared simple and fast was developed.
If anyone askes me that this instant food improves the way of people live, I will say yes because this help people who is busy to eat.
강사 첨삭
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... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
>> I think that preparing food nowadays is easier than in the past. It is because of the change of people\'s lifestyle.
People have to move faster because of the fastness of processing velocity.
>> People have to move faster because of the speed of how things are processed.
Therefore, instant food that can be prepared simple and fast was developed.
>> CORRECT!
If anyone askes me that this instant food improves the way of people live, I will say yes because this help people who is busy to eat.
>> If someone asks me if instant food improves the way people live, I will say yes, because this helps busy people have time to eat.
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