Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you consider yourself spoiled back in the day?
How would you like to spoil yourself?
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My parents when I was young had to earn the money for us.
So I didn't have a time to spoil back in the day.
Because I have a younger brother and a younger sister.
I took care of my brother and my sister when my parents went to work.
I had to clean the room and washed the clothes by washing machine by myself.
At that time, It was hard work for me but I had to do it for my family.
강사 첨삭
You are such a good son, father, husband, coworker and friend.
Your story is so inspiring! I hope you also share such with your children.
I am so lucky I got to meet someone like you. May your life stories inspire more souls.
We better keep all your compositions, my friend, and compile them. By the end of this session, we already have a booklet.
Oh, this is so nice!
Thanks for sharing, James.
Until our next chat!
Have a wonderful year!
-Klein-
Would you consider yourself spoiled back in the day?How would you like to spoil yourself?==>My parents when I was young had to earn the money for us.>>Correct
OR >> My parents, when I was young, had to earn money for us.
So I didn\'t have a time to spoil back in the day.
>>So I didn\'t have time to be spoiled back in the day.Because I have a younger brother and a younger sister. I took care of my brother and my sister when my parents went to work.
>>Since I have a younger brother and a younger sister, I took care of them when my parents went to work.I had to clean the room and washed the clothes by washing machine by myself.
>>I had to clean the room and wash the clothes using the washing machine by myself.At that time, It was hard work for me but I had to do it for my family.
>>Correct!
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