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2017-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Which among our topics seem to be humdrum to you? Which general topics do you always avoid talking about? ==> As you know, I am not good at speaking and listening in English. And I always feel new when we do a class. So, I cannot find a boring topic among our topics. The class is very interesting to me. I just worry about my English speaking and listening skill. I try to improve my ability but I think I need a lot of times for that. Anyway I don't hurry up because I know there was no way except studying. And there is no topics what I avoid talking about. I always standby in order to answer about you question. I'm very happy to talk with you in our class. So, don't worry and don't hesitate when you ask to me. I think It's the first time that I finish the homework early. I will try to finish my homework early when I have a time in the lunch time. Today is the first day that I try. Thank you and have a nice day Klein.

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Hurrah! I am so happy to receive this at this hour, my friend. Thank you for completing your homework early. I am so glad you did because I know that you\'d have more time to sleep later this evening. Actually, this is the second time. The first was a brave attempt. You failed to finish it but I checked it immediately. This time, I waited for a few hours. Nonetheless, I am truly happy not only with your early submission but also with the contents of your composition. It\'s a relief that you don\'t find any of our topics boring and there\'s no topic that you try to avoid. Aha! We can talk about anything under the sun, my dear. Of course, I want you to learn as many useful words and expressions during the process. I will definitely complete every feedback, which you may find useful. Thank you very much! How are you feeling now, James? Take it easy there and stay safe and warm. I am looking forward to reading another composition from you. I guess that\'ll be tomorrow. Oh, for sure! Thanks a bunch! Regards to your family, especially your adorable daughter. Tell her, \"Welcome home!\" So long! -Klein- Which among our topics seem to be humdrum to you?Which general topics do you always avoid talking about?==> As you know, I am not good at speaking and listening in English. >>CorrectAnd I always feel new when we do a class. >>Correct OR >> And I always feel new when we have our class.So, I cannot find a boring topic among our topics.>>Correct The class is very interesting to me.>>Correct I just worry about my English speaking and listening skill.>>I just worry about my English speaking and listening skills. I try to improve my ability but I think I need a lot of times for that.>>I try to improve my ability but I think I need much time for that. Anyway I don\'t hurry up because I know there was no way except studying.>>Correct OR >> Anyway, I am not in a hurry because I know there is no better way than studying.And there is no topics what I avoid talking about.>>And there are no topics that I avoid talking about. I always standby in order to answer about you question.>>I\'m always on standby in order to answer your question/s. >>I always stand by in order to answer your question/s. I\'m very happy to talk with you in our class.>>Correct! So, don\'t worry and don\'t hesitate when you ask to me.>>So, don\'t worry and hesitate when you ask me. >>So, don\'t worry and hesitate to ask me.I think It\'s the first time that I finish the homework early.>>I think it\'s the first time that I finished the homework early. >>I think it\'s my first time to finish my homework early. I will try to finish my homework early when I have a time in the lunch time.>>I will try to finish my homework early when I have time at lunch. Today is the first day that I try.>>Today is the first day I tried it.Thank you and have a nice day Klein. >>Correct!

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