Homework

Hi, Lee!

Well, I appreciate your composition.

You\'ve shared about what you want to change about yourself.

I wish you good luck.

By doing this, it will make you a better person. ^^

You can do it!

_Teacher Dianne ^_^

First, I think that changing a night people into a morning person is very important to me because I always oversleep and waste my time.

>> First, I think that changing from a night person into a morning person is very important to me because I always oversleep and waste my time.

It is important to wake up early and do many works that I can\'t do because I don\'t have enough time without wasting time which is never return.

>> It is important to wake up early and do many works that I can\'t do because I don\'t have enough time and I can never turn back the wasted time. 

>> Or: It is important for me to wake up early and do a lot or work that I can\'t do because I lack time and I can\'t return the time that I\'ve wasted.

So waking up early in the morning can play a major role in managing time , developing me and doing some works to do.
>> So waking up early in the morning can play a major role in managing my time, developing myself, and accomplishing some works.

 Second, I was not encouraged to discover what to do on my own account in learning.

>> Correct

For example, I studied English in order to get test score in school,which leads to losing the capacity to write,listen,speak.

>> For example, I studied English in order to get a high test score in school which led me to losing the capacity or ability to write, listen, and speak the language.

In Korea people tend to assess English ability at test score,but people who get high score can not speak a single sentence,which is my problems either.

>> In Korea, the English ability of the people is tend to be assessed with their test scores. However, the people who get high scores cannot compose a single sentence which is also my problem.

I wish to access and master English not for score but as language.

>> I wish to master and be skillful about English not only for getting a high score but also as a good speaker of the language.

So in the new year, I want to change is that doing some idiomatic English not cling to score.

>> So for this New Year, what I want to change is that to learn more about English idioms and not to cling about the score.