Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Which part of our class is spine chilling for you?
Which part of English do you think is spine chilling?
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There is no parts spine chilling for me.
Because I started studying English by myself.
I have a passion to learn English so I don't feel the bad emotion in our class.
I always glad to meet you in the morning and I start the new day with you.
As you know, I am always tired because of work, but the moment when I talk with you is very exciting.
But as you know, I hope to improve my English skill.
Among speaking, listening, writing, I think listening is sometimes spine chilling.
I try to listen what you say, sometimes I miss what you say and I don't understand what you say. So I cannot answer immediately.
I think speaking is also difficult but I can improve my speaking skill with practice.
But listening case, I don't know how to improve that.
I tried several times to listen but listening ability is not improved.
Anyway I will try again to improve my listening skill.
강사 첨삭
Aha! This is very telling. Thank you very much.
I suggest you expose yourself to more English materials. No worries; I\'ll share a lot with you. This way, you can improve on your listening skill inch by inch. I simply admire your patience and determination. You can do it, James!
Count on me!
It\'s good that you feel at ease during our class. This will definitely enable you to absorb more. Never lose that motivation, my friend.
I hope that even after several years, you won\'t get bored speaking with me.
Thanks for completing your homework early once more. You sure are a man of your words.
Until our next chat!
-Klein-
Which part of our class is spine chilling for you?Which part of English do you think is spine chilling?==>There is no parts spine chilling for me. Because I started studying English by myself.
>>There is no part, which is spine chilling for me, because I started studying English by myself.
>>There is nothing spine chilling for me, because I started studying English by myself.
I have a passion to learn English so I don\'t feel the bad emotion in our class.>>I have passion to learn English, so I don\'t feel the bad emotion in our class.
I always glad to meet you in the morning and I start the new day with you.>>I\'m always glad to meet you in the morning to start the new day.
>>I\'m always glad to start the new day by meeting you in the morning.
>>I\'m always glad to start the new day with you.
As you know, I am always tired because of work, but the moment when I talk with you is very exciting.>>Correct!
OR >> As you know, I am always tired because of work, but the moment I talk with you is very exciting.But as you know, I hope to improve my English skill.>>Correct!
Among speaking, listening, writing, I think listening is sometimes spine chilling.>>Correct!
OR >>Among all the English communication skills, I think listening is sometimes spine chilling.
I try to listen what you say, sometimes I miss what you say and I don\'t understand what you say. So I cannot answer immediately.>>I try to listen to what you say but sometimes I miss some words, so I don\'t understand you and I cannot answer immediately.
I think speaking is also difficult but I can improve my speaking skill with practice.>>Correct!
But listening case, I don\'t know how to improve that.>>But in listening\'s case, I don\'t know how to improve that.
I tried several times to listen but listening ability is not improved. >>I tried to listen several times but my listening ability is not improved.
Anyway I will try again to improve my listening skill.
>>Correct!
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