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I think we have our own time, and it actually depends on the person who will experience this situation.
As long as they are responsible enough to face its pros and cons, it would be fine.
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When asked about why adult children are living with parents, parents\' responses seem to be diverse.
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One group would answer that they don\'t have enough income to live on their own, another would say that they are not yet married, and the other would reply that they are saving money while enrolled in school.
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Overall, financial concerns could be the primary reason.
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However, I think there are other reasons except financial concerns.
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Today, a married young couple tends to get a job respectively.
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They need someone to take care of their children.
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That is why many young adults are living with their parents.
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It would become a win-win strategy because old parents get paid and a young couple may not worry about their children.
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What\'s more, with more young adults\' marriage getting delayed, many grown children are still living with parents.
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Therefore, I think there must be no age to leave parents.
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Even though many young adults well know sense of independence and freedom, they don\'t stop living with parents because they could lose much more if they left parents.
>> Even though many young adults know sense of independence and freedom, well they don\'t stop living with parents because they could lose much more if they left parents.
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