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2017-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Which among the things around you can you say are illusory? ==> When I was young I couldn't find luxury cars on the road but nowadays I can find luxury cars easily on the road. The kind of luxury cars are Benz, BMW, Audi etc. I always dream what I drive a luxury car, but the present is different. The purpose of vehicle is transportation someone form here to there. But It's man's desire that he wants to drive a luxury car like Benz. Some Korean young people who doesn't have their own house spend moneys for buying luxury cars. They enjoy their life when they were young. In my case I didn't do that because I have to earn the money. After I get married I have to save moneys to buy my house. The luxury car is illusory for me. Anyway, today is Friday. It's TGIF. Have a nice weekend, Klein.

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Nice one! You have put your ideas into wonderful English words. You did this without much sweat, James! I was really smiling while reading your composition because it makes so much sense. Your understanding of the question is commendable! Thank you for completing my week, my friend. How I wish I could still disturb you tomorrow. Don\'t panic! I won\'t ruin your weekend with your beloved ones. Thanks for sharing! This is really the kind of composition that I can always look forward to receiving from you. I know that there would be plenty more and they would be equally great or better. Once again, THANK YOU! Until our next chat, James! Have a safe time! -Klein- Which among the things around you can you say are illusory?==> When I was young I couldn\'t find luxury cars on the road but nowadays I can find luxury cars easily on the road.>>Correct OR >> When I was young, I couldn\'t find luxury cars on the road but nowadays, I can easily find them. The kind of luxury cars are Benz, BMW, Audi etc. >>The brands of luxury cars are Benz, BMW, Audi, etc.I always dream what I drive a luxury car, but the present is different.>>I always dream of driving a luxury car, but the present is different. The purpose of vehicle is transportation someone form here to there.>>The purpose of such vehicle is to transport someone from here to there. But It\'s man\'s desire that he wants to drive a luxury car like Benz.>>But it\'s a man\'s desire to drive a luxury car like Benz.Some Korean young people who doesn\'t have their own house spend moneys for buying luxury cars.>>Some young Koreans who don\'t have their own house spend money for buying luxury cars. They enjoy their life when they were young.>>They enjoyed their life when they were young. In my case I didn\'t do that because I have to earn the money.>>In my case, I didn\'t do that because I had to earn money. After I get married I have to save moneys to buy my house.>>After I got married, I had to save money to buy a house.The luxury car is illusory for me.>>CorrectAnyway, today is Friday. >>Correct It\'s TGIF.>>Correct! Have a nice weekend, Klein. >>Correct

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