Homework

2017-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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T.G.I.F, teacher! How are you today? I am doing great today and the weather is warmer than yesterday. Do you have any plans this weekend? I will study English(OPIc) and clean my house. Homework: Describe your most meaningful achievements and how they relate to your future goals. My most meaningful achievements was meeting my wife. She is always right and she gives me a lot of help. So, my goal and my future is always achievable. See you our class soon.

강사 첨삭

T.G.I.F [이름]!


I\'m fine but a bit tired. Well my plans this weekend is just to eat then sleep or maybe I\'ll visit my parents house. That\'s a great Idea to study English during your weekends. But just don\'t forget to give time to your family and even to yourself. See you in class.


Teacher Travis.


My most meaningful achievements was meeting my wife.
>>Correct

>>OR: The most meaningful achievements of mine was meeting my wife.
 She is always right and she gives me a lot of help.
>>She is always right and she helps a lot.
So, my goal and my future is always achievable.
>>So, my future goal is always achievable.
See you our class soon.

>>See you in our class soon.

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