Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How should you deal with a sourpuss?
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At first, I try to find why he (or she) is in bad mood.
After I know why he has a sourpuss, I will talk with him carefully.
if I say rude, it is very aggressive for him, and It is impossible to improve our relations.
If it is possible, I use humor when we talk each other.
I will ask him why you are in bad mood and how can you overcome that emotion.
And I ask him to try to remove that emotion with me.
I will suggest him to imagine pleasant situations for his life.
It will help him to decrease bad emotion.
Anyway it is very difficult him to change his emotion from bad to good.
But If I try continuously, I think I can change his feeling. (Finish)
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, James!
You just drove away my blues. Thank you very much. I was a sourpuss but after reading your composition, I turned into something else.
Thank you for sharing.
I wonder how you pick yourself up. Oh, I think your family picks you up, especially your daughter, at all times.
Stay cheerful, James!
Until our next chat, my friend.
-Klein-
How should you deal with a sourpuss?==> At first, I try to find why he (or she) is in bad mood.>>Correct
After I know why he has a sourpuss, I will talk with him carefully.>>After I know why he\'s acting as a sourpuss, I will talk with him carefully.
if I say rude, it is very aggressive for him, and It is impossible to improve our relations.>>If I say something rude, it would anger him, and it is impossible to improve our relations.
If it is possible, I use humor when we talk each other.>>If it is possible, I would use humor when we talk with each other.
I will ask him why you are in bad mood and how can you overcome that emotion.>>I will ask him why he is in bad mood and how I can overcome that emotion.
And I ask him to try to remove that emotion with me.>>And I will ask him to try to remove that emotion with me.
I will suggest him to imagine pleasant situations for his life.>>Correct
It will help him to decrease bad emotion.>>Correct
OR >> I will help him to reduce such bad emotion.Anyway it is very difficult him to change his emotion from bad to good.>>Correct
But If I try continuously, I think I can change his feeling. (Finish)
>>Correct!
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