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Do you consider yourself as sort of flippant?
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I think I don't have a flippant attitude.
Because I learned that I have to keep the manner when I meet people.
And as you know, I am company worker. So I have to work with my colleague in the company.
The attitude is very important when I work in the company.
I cannot do anything if there is no help when I work.
My colleague and I have to help each other.
If I am rude to my colleague, he doesn't give any help for me.
Also If my colleague has bad manner, I don't give any help for him too.
So wherever I am, I take a effort to keep the manner.
강사 첨삭
Nice one!
You completed your composition before this day ends, so I congratulate you for that.
Another thing that I am proud of is you know how to get your acts together. That\'s really tough, especially for me, but you reminded me how important it is to keep our manners. Thank you for that! It\'s such a big help, my friend.
I hope that the recommendations I provided below will also help you. Review them when you find the chance.
But take note that there are still \"correct\" marks, which only means that your writing skill sure isn\'t that bad.
Keep writing, James!
I am looking forward to chatting with you once more.
Until then!
Sweet dreams.
Sweet dreams.
-Klein-
Do you consider yourself as sort of flippant?
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I think I don\'t have a flippant attitude. Because I learned that I have to keep the manner when I meet people.
>>Correct
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I think I don\'t have a flippant attitude. Because I learned that I have to keep the manner when I meet people.
>>Correct
OR >> I think I don\'t have a flippant attitude, because I learned to keep my manners when meeting people.
And as you know, I am company worker. So I have to work with my colleague in the company.
>>And as you know, I am a company worker, so I have to work with my colleagues in the company.
>>And as you know, I am a company worker, so I have to work with my colleagues in the company.
The attitude is very important when I work in the company.
>>Attitude is very important when I work in the company.
>>Attitude is very important when I work in the company.
I cannot do anything if there is no help when I work.
>>Correct!
>>Correct!
My colleague and I have to help each other.
>>Correct!
>>Correct!
OR >> My colleagues and I have to help one another.
If I am rude to my colleague, he doesn\'t give any help for me.
>>If I am rude to my colleague, he won\'t give or offer me any help.
>>If I am rude to my colleague, he won\'t give or offer me any help.
Also If my colleague has bad manner, I don\'t give any help for him too.
>>Also, if my colleague has bad manners, I won\'t give him any help, either.
So wherever I am, I take a effort to keep the manner.
>>Also, if my colleague has bad manners, I won\'t give him any help, either.
So wherever I am, I take a effort to keep the manner.
>>So wherever I am, I exert effort to keep my manners.
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