Homework
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Hello, teacher!
I postponed our class yesterday. Because it was labor union foundation day, so our company gave a holiday to us. And our family(my childeren and wife) came back to our house, I picked up them.
I will attend our class today.
homework : Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology.
Answer : Technology is still changing and developing, engineesr are keep trying to keep abreast of the changes in technology. If they cannot change the way or study which is developing technology, they fall behind in their heels.
See you soon.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday [이름].
I\'m glad that you finish your homework. I like your answer because it\'s true, technology is growing fast. hopefully that technology will only bring advantages to us. See you in our class.
Teacher Travis.
Technology is still changing and developing, engineesr are keep trying to keep abreast of the changes in technology.
>>Correct.
If they cannot change the way or study which is developing technology, they fall behind in their heels.
>>Correct.
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