Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
(1) What are you swamped with these days?
What can you do about it?
==> In my case I am swamped with the work.
I don't know why I came back home late.
I work hard in the company and I spent a lot of time in my work.
Although I finished many works but another many works are waiting for me.
Because of that I am always tired and I want to take a rest.
I hope to spend times with my family especially my daughter.
So I try to spend with my daughter on weekends.
(2) How do you make amends to your wife after a serious fight?
==> Sometimes I dispute with my wife in trivial matters.
The important thing is not to fight with my wife.
After disputing with my wife, I always said to her "I'm sorry, I had a big mistake."
I give up to my wife after fight.
I think It is the best way to keep the peace of my family.
강사 첨삭
Our mantra should be, \"TAKE IT EASY!\"
How are you, James?
Don\'t tell me that you are tired again.
Look on the bright side: you won\'t waste much time because you got plenty to do.
Besides, you got the weekend to have some quality time with your angel. And take note that that\'s tomorrow! It\'s even your son\'s birthday!
Many happy returns to your son, James! He sure is an adult now. I wonder how you\'re going to celebrate his birthday.
Please keep me posted! For now, extend my warm greetings to him. Better yet, let him talk to me for a few minutes or so.
I hope he really enrolls in Power English soon. Let\'s talk about suitable teachers for him in the evening soon.
I won\'t let you read such a long message from me today. Enjoy your time, James!
SO LONG!
-Klein-
(1) What are you swamped with these days?What can you do about it?==> In my case I am swamped with the work.>>In my case, I am swamped with work.
I don\'t know why I came back home late.
>>Correct!I work hard in the company and I spent a lot of time in my work.>>I work hard in the company and spend a lot of time with my work.
Although I finished many works but another many works are waiting for me.>>Although I finished much work already, many other work/tasks are waiting for me.
Because of that I am always tired and I want to take a rest.>>Correct
I hope to spend times with my family especially my daughter.>>I hope to spend much time with my family, especially my daughter.
So I try to spend with my daughter on weekends.>>So, I try to spend time with my daughter on weekends.(2) How do you make amends to your wife after a serious fight?==> Sometimes I dispute with my wife in trivial matters.>>Sometimes, I dispute trivial matters with my wife.
The important thing is not to fight with my wife.>>Correct!
After disputing with my wife, I always said to her \"I\'m sorry, I had a big mistake.\">>After disputing with my wife, I always tell her, \"I\'m sorry. I have a big mistake.\"
>>After disputing with my wife, I always apologize to her.
I give up to my wife after fight. >>I give in to my wife after the fight.
I think It is the best way to keep the peace of my family.
>>I think it is the best way to keep peace in my family.
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