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2017-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How often do you splurge? ==> Thank you for your congratulation of my son's birthday. I will deliver your greetings to my son. In my case, I am company worker, so my salary is fixed. As you know, I have a son and a daughter and I have to educate them for their life. I spend a lot of money for them, so I cannot splurge for me. I want to buy a new luxury car and want to live in the luxury pastoral house. But It is just my dream. I have to save money for them and for my old life. So I endure that I want to spend a lot of money. Anyway, today is Friday. It's TGIF. Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday, Klein.

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No worries! Your hard work will definitely bear fruits. But of course, keep in mind that you should always maintain good health. Without this, nothing would be worth it. Also, if you need help, never hesitate to ask, especially your loved ones. They would be more than willing to give you a hand. If I can, I will also help you! Enjoy the rest of your Friday, James. Best regards to you and your family. Enjoy the celebration of your son\'s coming of age! Share your photos with me later.Until then! -Klein- How often do you splurge?==>Thank you for your congratulation of my son\'s birthday.>>Thank you for congratulating my son on his birthday. I will deliver your greetings to my son. >>CorrectIn my case, I am company worker, so my salary is fixed.>>In my case, I am a company worker, so my salary is fixed. As you know, I have a son and a daughter and I have to educate them for their life.>>Correct OR >> As you know, I have a son and a daughter, so I have to educate them for their life. >> As you know, I have a son and a daughter, so I have to provide for their education. I spend a lot of money for them, so I cannot splurge for me.>>I spend a lot of money for them, so I cannot splurge for myself. I want to buy a new luxury car and want to live in the luxury pastoral house.>>I want to buy a new luxury car and live in a luxury pastoral house. But It is just my dream.>>CorrectOR >> But this is just my dream. I have to save money for them and for my old life.>>Correct OR >> I have to send them money and save some for my retirement. So I endure that I want to spend a lot of money.>>So, I endure it though I want to spend a lot of money.Anyway, today is Friday. It\'s TGIF.>>Correct! Have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday, Klein. >>Correct!

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