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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Lee!
I do agree with what you\'ve written here.
For me, culture is diverse. It is distinct in each country.
You have a great composition. ^^
Keep it up!
Have a great weekend!
_Teacher Dianne^^
It is impossible to define culture as a single word or sentence.
>> It is impossible to define culture in a single word or in one sentence.
But I think that culture is a complex including all the habits,ideas,behaviors,things and ability which people share and acquisition as members of the community.
>> But I think, culture is complex that includes all the habits, ideas, behaviors, things, and abilities which people share and acquire as members of the community.
I consider the most interesting culture as human cultural assets(properties) because they are unique,peculiar and unusual.
>> I consider the most interesting culture as human cultural assets or properties because they are unique, peculiar, and unusual.
A living National Treasure is a person with the ability to make or perform one of the officially designated intangible cultural properties,which are organized within more than 100 aspects of korean tranditional culture from tranditional music to building techniques.
>> A living national treasure is a person with the ability to make or perform one of the officially designated intangible cultural properties, which are organized within more than 100 aspects of Korean traditional culture from traditional music to building techniques.
The person who are designated as Living National Treasure have responsibility and right to show the ability and to train successors to conserve the culture.
>> The person who is designated as a living national treasure has the responsibility and the right to show the ability and to train successors to conserve the culture.
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