Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me about the most heinous experience you’ve had.
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It was my experience after I entered the company.
The company always requires the people to innovate.
So, the people in the human resource department make a curriculum for their company workers.
The curriculum continue 5 days from Monday to Friday.
At the curriculum, I had to wake up at 6:00, and I went to bed at 2 or 3 AM the next day during 5 days.
When I woke up in daytime and night, I had to do something that was given to me.
For 5 days, I just slept totally 12 hours.
Anyway it was terrible curriculum but I passed it.
It was the most heinous experience I have had.
강사 첨삭
You seem to be emotional putting those bits of memory of yours into words, my friend. I\'m just glad it\'s over and you get to sleep for a total of 20 hours a week now. How I wish it could be more!
Nonetheless, at least your current schedule is more bearable. You even have enough time for your English studies. I truly appreciate all the effort that you put into this. Look at how you composed this homework of yours, James! We only have minimal errors!
Way to go!
I hope that you will continue to share the good vibes.
Thanks a bunch for today, James.
Until the next one!
-Klein-
Tell me about the most heinous experience you’ve had.==> It was my experience after I entered the company.>>Correct
The company always requires the people to innovate.>>Correct
So, the people in the human resource department make a curriculum for their company workers.>>Correct
The curriculum continue 5 days from Monday to Friday.>>The curriculum runs for five days from Mondays to Fridays.
At the curriculum, I had to wake up at 6:00, and I went to bed at 2 or 3 AM the next day during 5 days.>>In the curriculum, I had to wake up at 6:00 and go to bed at 2:00 or 3:00 AM the next day for five days.
When I woke up in daytime and night, I had to do something that was given to me.>>Correct
For 5 days, I just slept totally 12 hours.>>For 5 days, I just slept for a total of 12 hours.
Anyway it was terrible curriculum but I passed it.>>Anyway, it was a terrible curriculum but I passed it.
It was the most heinous experience I have had.
>>Correct!
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