homework
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Creative Writing: How important is it for people to follow the news?
I think that is important.
Because the news affects our lives and makes public opinion.
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I think that is important.
>> Correct!
Because the news affects our lives and makes public opinion.
>> Because the news affects our lives and the public opinion greatly.
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