Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the things that you want to stay away from?
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If it is possible, I want to avoid becoming a old man.
My spirit is always 20 years old but my body is weaker and weaker.
Nowadays I have to exercise carefully for my body.
If I do exercise hard, some problem will occur next day.
It is serious problem to me.
If I can go back to the past,I will live diligently and care for my health.
It will give a good effect to me and maybe my life gets better.
Anyway youth is good thing.
So I want to live young with my family.
강사 첨삭
You can always be young at heart, my friend!
At times, we may feel so weak but with gusto we can definitely carry on. Keep up with your exercise for it will bear fruits in due time. Don\'t strain yourself, though. Know the limits of your body as well.Stay safe and warm, James!Thank you for sharing this with me. Until the next one!
Stay healthy!
-Klein-
What are the things that you want to stay away from?==> If it is possible, I want to avoid becoming a old man.
>>If it is possible, I want to avoid becoming an old man.My spirit is always 20 years old but my body is weaker and weaker.>>Correct
Nowadays I have to exercise carefully for my body.>>Correct
If I do exercise hard, some problem will occur next day.>>Correct
It is serious problem to me.>>It is a serious problem to me.If I can go back to the past, I will live diligently and care for my health.>>Correct
It will give a good effect to me and maybe my life gets better.>>It will give a good effect on me and maybe my life would get better.
>>It will affect me positively and maybe my life would get better.Anyway youth is good thing.
>>Anyway, youth is a good thing.So I want to live young with my family.
>>So, I want to live young with my family.
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