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Hi, Lee!
Great work again here!
Well, for some, reading books is their hobby.
It\'s strange for me to know that you don\'t read books because what I know about you is that, your studious. ^^
But thank you for sharing something about a book you\'ve read.
See you tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne
No unfortunately I don\'t read books because of lack of concentration and excursiveness which makes me to think many useless things.
>> No, unfortunately I don\'t read books because of the lack of concentration and excursiveness which makes me think of many useless things.
But I remember one book,who moved my cheese,that I read roughly 4 years ago as my English teacher recommended to read the book in the original language,English,to get a feel for English.Reading the book,I realized many things through this book.
>> But I remember one book that I read roughly 4 years ago that moved my cheese. This book was recommended by my English teacher and the teacher told me to read it in the original language which is English to get a feel for English. I realized many things through this book.
At that time I read this book several times because this book is very easy to me and has a large type and interesting pictures.
>> At that time, I read this book several times because it is very easy to me and it has a large font of letters and interesting pictures.
Through this book,I realized the importance of the change in real life and people must have strengthened a attitude toward change to prepare the change of the world and have a strength to adapt in order to survive in the competitive world.
>> Through this book, I realized the importance of change in real life. People must strengthen their attitude toward world change and have the courage to adapt in order to survive in the competitive world.
Before I read this book,I accepted the word \"change\" as a single word,but I think people\'s success and failure depend on change after I read this book.If the change come to me, I accept this as the opportunity which can improve me appears to me.
>> Before I read this book, I accepted the word \"change\" as a single word, but after reading it, I think that change depends on people\'s success and failure. If I encounter that kind of change, I\'ll accept it because it will be an opportunity for me to improve myself to be a better person.
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