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2017-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Relate any sob stories you could think of right now. ==> I am very busy, so I usually came back home late nowadays. Most of Korean company workers have to work hard in the company for earning money. They have to earn the money for their family. In my case, I spend a lot of time for a work in the company. Therefore, I cannot share my time with my daughter after work. It is the sad thing in the present. My daughter wants me to come back home early,so she always asks me when I can come back home in the evening. My answer is always same, "I will come back home after work." Nowadays my daughter don't ask to me when I can come back home. It is the sob story I can think of right now.

강사 첨삭

This is really sad, James! How I wish your daughter doesn\'t feel all too bad about it. Please explain it to her. Talk to her. Some may think that their children are too young to understand. The thing here is that, your daughter is young or old enough to understand. Also, always find time for them. I know that you do! Just take it easy there, my friend. Do not forget to let me know if there is anything I can help you with. Keep safe! -Klein- P.S. Do not stay too late in the office. Relate any sob stories you could think of right now.==> I am very busy, so I usually came back home late nowadays.>>I am very busy, so I usually come back home late nowadays. Most of Korean company workers have to work hard in the company for earning money.>>Most Korean company workers have to work hard in the company to earn money. They have to earn the money for their family.>>They have to earn money for their family.In my case, I spend a lot of time for a work in the company.>>In my case, I spend a lot of time working in the company. Therefore, I cannot share my time with my daughter after work.>>Correct It is the sad thing in the present.>>It is the sad thing at present. My daughter wants me to come back home early,so she always asks me when I can come back home in the evening.>>Correct! My answer is always same, \"I will come back home after work.\">>My answer is always the same: \"I will come back home after work.\" Nowadays my daughter don\'t ask to me when I can come back home.>>Nowadays, my daughter doesn\'t ask me when I can come back home. It is the sob story I can think of right now. >>Correct

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