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I really love going to museums, for they are instant time machines :)
I believe they instantly portray a country\'s rich history^^
I would love to visit any museum in Korea someday!
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At the time when I went to elementary school, the opportunities of field trips to museums were very rarely given to children.
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Because most museums were located in Seoul, it was nearly impossible for children in the countryside to visit museums.
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Nowadays, small and large museums were spread throughout the country and even over the countryside.
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The purpose of modern museums is to collect, preserve, interpret, and display items of artistic, cultural, or scientific significance for the education of the public.
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That is why I think going to museums is much beneficial for children.
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Modern museums are really flamboyant to display and explain anything using the state-of-the-art techniques.
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I can perceive that nowadays teachers are so often utilizing museums to teach students as Minji told me several times that she would take field trips to museums.
>> I can perceive that teachers nowadays are utilizing museums to teach students so often as Minji told me several times that she would take field trips to museums.
Korean famous museums of the most haunting glimpses into Korea\'s past are located in Seoul, including National Museum, National Folk Museum, War Memorial, National Palace Museum, Seoul Museum of History, and Leeum, Samsung Museum of Art.
>>Museums which are famous for showing the most haunting glimpses into Korea\'s past are located in Seoul, including National Museum, National Folk Museum, War Memorial, National Palace Museum, Seoul Museum of History, and Leeum, Samsung Museum of Art.
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