Homework

Dear [이름],

A terrific Thursday to you! ^.^

          I am really glad that you did your homework. Thanks a lot! ^^

          However, I think you need to double-check your writing to avoid mistakes next time, especially in grammar.

          Anyway, don\'t worry! ^^ You did great in doing your work. Congratulations! ^^,

          That\'s all for now! ^^. See you! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

In my opinion, learning is always better to have a teacher.

>> In my opinion, learning is always better with a teacher.

>> OR: In my opinion, learning is always better when there is a teacher.

It\'s because teacher is good at teaching, so they can help people to understand the new information.

>> It\'s because a teacher is good at teaching, so they can help people understand new information.

If people learn unfamiliar studying by themselves, they could understand wrong way.

>> If people learn unfamiliar studies by themselves, they could understand them in a wrong way.

So we need a great teacher.

>> Therefore, we need a great teacher.

>> OR: Therefore, we need great teachers.