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What are the things that you’d rather not try because you think that there’s a snowball’s chance in hell that you would get something good from it?
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I don't have a skill to earn money except working in the company.
I had an experience that I invested in stocks, but I failed at my investment.
After that I know that I don't have a talent about earning money.
So I focused on my work in the company.
I am satisfying my life as a company worker.
강사 첨삭
It must have been terrifying when you lost such big investment.I\'m glad you were able to recover. Thanks for sharing, James!
There\'s just one thing that I would like you to try.Perhaps, you can explore other possibilities, so your work won\'t limit your expenses. That\'s a friendly advice.
Enjoy the rest of the day, my friend.
Until our next chat!
-Klein-
What are the things that you’d rather not try because you think that there’s a snowball’s chance in hell that you would get something good from it?==>I don\'t have a skill to earn money except working in the company.>>I don\'t have the skill to earn money except to work in the company.
>>I don\'t have the skill for earning money except working in the company.
I had an experience that I invested in stocks, but I failed at my investment.>>I had an experience investing in stock, but I failed in my investment.
After that I know that I don\'t have a talent about earning money.>>After that I knew that I don\'t have the talent to earn money.
So I focused on my work in the company.>>Correct
I am satisfying my life as a company worker.
>>I am satisfied with my life as a company worker.
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