Homework
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Describe your \"significant other\".
Tell me about his/her strength and weakness.
She is my grandmother.
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I will tell some strength and weakness.
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OR: I will tell you some of her strength and weaknesses.
I think one of her strength is that she is good at finding way to somewhere.
>>I think one of her strengths is that she is good at finding way at something.
If she visited some place, and then she find a way to that place when she visited second time.
>>If she visited a place she always finds some way the next time she visits that place again.
I think it connected her excellent observation to other things.
>>I think this has something to do with her being a keen observer.
One of her weakness is that she is getting old.
>>One of her weaknesses is that she is getting old.
Sometimes it could be also strenth.
>>Sometimes it could also be her strength.
But by getting old, her knee is getting uncomfortable to walk.
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At that moment, I feel sorry and not good.
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But I think she is enough strong to handle it.
>>But I think she is strong enough to handle it.
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