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2017-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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1. the an 2. a the 3. I would love to take a luxury cruise next year to the exotic location such as Indonesia or Panama. 4. Jimmy did not enjoy the cruise to Alaska because it was too cold and rainy. The weather ruined the entire trip. 5. Let's find a place where we can just sit for a couple of hours, drink some coffee, and have a good chat. 6. That is the place where Sidney proposed to Meryll. Isn't that a beautiful location? 7. Suddenly, the password Sandra always used to log in to her email didn't work anymore. Somebody had hacked in and changed the password. 8. When Nick was on safari in Tanzania, he saw a cheetah hunting prey. He took some beautiful video of the cheetah. 9. Did you enjoy the book I recommended to you? Wasn't that an exciting novel? 10. I need a smartphone which allows me to check my email and use Facebook. I really want a phone with good battery life.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Miss [이름]!

Thanks for the effort and time.

I hope you have a good day!

See you tomorrow!

 

~Teacher Shanee^^,

 

1. the an
>>> Correct!
2. a the
>>> Correct!
3. I would love to take a luxury cruise next year to the exotic location such as Indonesia or Panama.
>>> I would love to take a luxury cruise next year to an exotic location such as Indonesia or Panama.
4. Jimmy did not enjoy the cruise to Alaska because it was too cold and rainy. The weather ruined the entire trip.
>>> Correct!
5. Let\'s find a place where we can just sit for a couple of hours, drink some coffee, and have a good chat.
>>> Correct!
6. That is the place where Sidney proposed to Meryll. Isn\'t that a beautiful location?
>>> Correct!
7. Suddenly, the password Sandra always used to log in to her email didn\'t work anymore. Somebody had hacked in and changed the password.
>>> Correct!
8. When Nick was on safari in Tanzania, he saw a cheetah hunting prey. He took some beautiful video of the cheetah.
>>> Correct!
9. Did you enjoy the book I recommended to you? Wasn\'t that an exciting novel?
>>> Correct!
10. I need a smartphone which allows me to check my email and use Facebook. I really want a phone with good battery life.

>>> Correct!

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