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2017-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Hello!^^ I just got time to do my homework..^^; I am always soory not to do my homework on time.. This homework is so difficult and I dont understand at all.. If it is okay, I would like to talk about these in class.. Please...^^ 1. We were sitting in the bus shelter and waited for the rain to stop. 2. The documentation which was telecast last Tuesday was impressive. 3. We had great fun at the party. We played silly games. 4. He had saved a little money. He traveled to Australia. 5. They were chatting along and didn't see the car coming. 6. The reception had been prepared carefully and was a great success. 7. He was picked up by his mother and didn't have to wait for the bus. 8. She had finished her degree and started to work for an international company. 9. She was listening to the radio and didn't hear the doorbell.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Miss [이름]!

I just finished checking this homework.

So I wasn\'t able to see your request earlier.

Anyway, we are going to talk about this tomorrow.

Thanks a lot.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

 

Hello!^^ I just got time to do my homework..^^;
I am always soory not to do my homework on time..

>>> I am always sorry  not being able to do my homework on time.
This homework is so difficult and I dont understand at all..

>>> This homework is so difficult and I don\'t understand at all.

If it is okay, I would like to talk about these in class..
Please...^^

1. We were sitting in the bus shelter and waited for the rain to stop.
>>> We were sitting in the bus shelter waiting for the rain to stop.  
2. The documentation which was telecast last Tuesday was impressive.
>>> The documentation telecast last Tuesday was impressive.
3. We had great fun at the party. We played silly games.
>>> We had great fun at the party playing silly games.
4. He had saved a little money. He traveled to Australia.
>>> Having saved a little money, he traveled to Australia.
5. They were chatting along and didn\'t see the car coming.
>>>Chatting along, they didn\'t see the car coming.
6. The reception had been prepared carefully and was a great success.
>>> The reception, having been prepared carefully, was a great success.
7. He was picked up by his mother and didn\'t have to wait for the bus.
>>> Picked up by his mother, he didn\'t have to wait for the bus.
8. She had finished her degree and started to work for an international company.
>>> Having finished her degree, she started to work for an international company.
9. She was listening to the radio and didn\'t hear the doorbell.

>>> Listening to the radio she didn\'t hear the doorbell.

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