HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Miss [이름]!
I just finished checking this homework.
So I wasn\'t able to see your request earlier.
Anyway, we are going to talk about this tomorrow.
Thanks a lot.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Hello!^^ I just got time to do my homework..^^;
I am always soory not to do my homework on time..
>>> I am always sorry not being able to do my homework on time.
This homework is so difficult and I dont understand at all..
>>> This homework is so difficult and I don\'t understand at all.
If it is okay, I would like to talk about these in class..
Please...^^
1. We were sitting in the bus shelter and waited for the rain to stop.
>>> We were sitting in the bus shelter waiting for the rain to stop.
2. The documentation which was telecast last Tuesday was impressive.
>>> The documentation telecast last Tuesday was impressive.
3. We had great fun at the party. We played silly games.
>>> We had great fun at the party playing silly games.
4. He had saved a little money. He traveled to Australia.
>>> Having saved a little money, he traveled to Australia.
5. They were chatting along and didn\'t see the car coming.
>>>Chatting along, they didn\'t see the car coming.
6. The reception had been prepared carefully and was a great success.
>>> The reception, having been prepared carefully, was a great success.
7. He was picked up by his mother and didn\'t have to wait for the bus.
>>> Picked up by his mother, he didn\'t have to wait for the bus.
8. She had finished her degree and started to work for an international company.
>>> Having finished her degree, she started to work for an international company.
9. She was listening to the radio and didn\'t hear the doorbell.
>>> Listening to the radio she didn\'t hear the doorbell.
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