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I envy you! Philippine service is known for being slow and devastating TT
Although a lot of establishments are doing their best to innovate, some of them just embrace stagnation^^
I hope it would improve one day :(
I am super excited to hear your voice on Wednesday TT
To be honest with you, Korean servers or workers tend to provide customers with the better quality service than Americans
and Canadians, according to my experiences.
>>To be honest with you, Korean servers or workers tend to provide customers with the better quality service than Americans
and Canadians, according to my experience.
It is because they have to do that to survive in the extremely competitive society.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, tremendous quality service systems have been evolving continuously in the Korean community.
>>CORRECT!
To matters better, the service systems have begun to be armed with a lot of automated and digitized means to serve customers the best service.
>> To make matters better, the service systems have begun to be armed with a lot of automated and digitized means to serve customers the best service.
Korean customers are well known for their sensitivity, peevishness and subtelness around the world.
>>Korean customers are well known for their sensitivity, peevishness and subtleness around the world.
That is why many launching products of the world have been tested in Korea in advance.
>>That is why many products being launched in the world have been tested in Korea in advance.
In Korea, customers are surely regarded as a king and queen.
>>In Korea, customers are surely regarded as king and queen.
In some affirmative point of view, most Koreans have to provide others with the quality service and could enjoying
receiving it at the same time.
>>In some affirmative point of view, most Koreans have to provide others with the quality service and could enjoy
receiving it at the same time.
It might be possible for Koreans to live in the virtuous circulation of the society.
>>CORRECT!
Whenever shopping and using some medical clinics, I am almost always treated as their father or grandfather.
>>CORRECT!
Almost all of Korean service are so quick, smooth, accurate, kind, and warm that most old Koreans really want to live in the country.
>> Almost all of Korean service is so quick, smooth, accurate, kind, and warm that most old Koreans really want to live in the country.
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