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Have you heard a snow job?
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I have heard a snow job when I am with my wife.
She always says to me " You are a good husband and a good father." when she needs something.
Whenever she says like that, I have to be careful.
For example, last spring in 2016, she said to me like that.
After saying that, she went Vietnam with my daughter except me for a trip.
She knows that Praises can even make a whale dance.
I have to say OK when she give me a praise and then she says what she wants.
I always know that it is a snow job, but I have to keep my wife's an my daughter's feelings.
It's one thing that I have heard a snow job.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, James!
Thanks for sharing this with me. This sure has its own humor, my friend.
I also bet there\'s some kind of truth in your wife\'s compliments. What do you think?
Cheer up now! At least she knows how to make you feel great about yourself. How about you, do you also praise yourself? Do you thank her for everything she sacrifices for your family? If not, you better think about it, my friend. If yes, then keep it up!
Please send her my best regards.
Have a good one, James! I\'m looking forward to reading another composition from you. I think you will send it anytime soon.
Until then!
-Klein-
Have you heard a snow job?==> I have heard a snow job when I am with my wife.>>I hear a snow job when I am with my wife.
>>I heard a snow job from my wife.She always says to me \" You are a good husband and a good father.\" when she needs something.>>She always tells me, \"You are a good husband and father\" when she needs something.
Whenever she says like that, I have to be careful.>>Whenever she says that, I have to be careful.
For example, last spring in 2016, she said to me like that.>> For example, last spring, in 2016, she said that to me.
After saying that, she went Vietnam with my daughter except me for a trip.>>After saying that, she went to Vietnam with my daughter, without me, for a trip.
She knows that Praises can even make a whale dance.>>Correct
I have to say OK when she give me a praise and then she says what she wants.>>Correct
OR (punctuation marks) >>I have to say, \"OK\" when she praises me, then she says what she wants.
I always know that it is a snow job, but I have to keep my wife\'s an my daughter\'s feelings.
>>Correct
OR (typographical error - AND) >>I always know that it is a snow job, but I have to keep my wife\'s and my daughter\'s feelings.It\'s one thing that I have heard a snow job.
>>It\'s one snow job that I have heard of.
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