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Do you know anyone who is imperious?
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I know imperious person and he is the vice president of my company.
He is in charge of our division and he controls everything in this company.
Sometimes he asks us to work late and asks to finish the work what we target a day.
And sometimes he shout to us when we have a meeting with him.
I don't think why he does like that.
We are all adult and we are trying to effort for a work.
I think it isn't a good method for developing our company.
It's not his company but our company.
Unfortunately he doesn't suggest us the vision of my company and he doesn't show the future of the company.
So, many company workers in this company don't like him because of these reasons.
강사 첨삭
Relax, James!
I hope you can keep a cool head. I know you can!
At times, we just have to understand such people. You\'ve worked with him for some time, so you may figure out why he\'s acting that way.
After work, why don\'t you try reaching out to him? You can do it, James! For sure, you want a harmonious relation with your co-workers.
Take it easy there!
And once again, thank you for sharing.
Enjoy the rest of your day!
-Klein-
Do you know anyone who is imperious?==> I know imperious person and he is the vice president of my company.>>I know am imperious person and he is the vice president of our company.
He is in charge of our division and he controls everything in this company.
>>CorrectSometimes he asks us to work late and asks to finish the work what we target a day. >>Sometimes, he asks us to work late and finish the work on a target day.
And sometimes he shout to us when we have a meeting with him.>>And sometimes, he shouts at us when we have a meeting with him.
I don\'t think why he does like that.>>I don\'t know why he does that.
We are all adult and we are trying to effort for a work.>>We are all adults and we are exerting our efforts for work.
I think it isn\'t a good method for developing our company.>>Correct
OR >> I think it isn\'t a good method to develop our company.
It\'s not his company but our company.>>Correct
Unfortunately he doesn\'t suggest us the vision of my company and he doesn\'t show the future of the company.>>Unfortunately, he doesn\'t suggest and show us the vision of our company and its future.
So, many company workers in this company don\'t like him because of these reasons.
>>Correct
OR>> Many workers in this company don\'t like him because of these.
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