Homework

Dear [이름],

          A marvelous Monday night to you! ^.^

          First of all, I would like to say VERY GOOD, because you made a well-composed writing.

          By the way, I strongly agree with you. Improving public transformation is a thing that can help a community, a city or a nation more. If the government spend more money on improving roads and highways, they might just make those bigger or make new ones. If they make new roads and highways, the place will become more crowded with different kinds of cars.

That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.


In my opinion, goverments should spend more money on improving public transportation.

>> In my opinion, the government should spend more money on improving public transportation.

It\'s because, there are many people who don\'t have any individual transportation like kids, young people, etc.

>> It\'s because there are many people who don\'t have any individual transportation like kids, young people, etc.

Moreover, improving public transportation could reduces the traffic jam too.

>> Moreover, improving public transportation could reduce traffic jams too.

It shows improving public transportation is better than improving roads and highways.

>> CORRECT!

So I think goverment need to improve the public transportation.

>> Therefore, I think the government needs to improve public transformation.