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Can you smooth everything over after a fight with a loved one and act like things are all good?
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In my case, I cannot hide my look after I fight with my wife.
So it is very difficult to act like things are all good.
My face is stiff and I shut up my mouth and stop talking with her after fighting.
My wife also doesn't tell me but she tells a lot with another people.
That makes me angry. So I also do same action with my wife.
We don't talk each other during one or two days.
After that day, I always give up to my wife.
I think when I give up it is for me and it keeps my family.
Anyway I try to reduce fighting with my wife and live interestingly with my family.
It is more helpful to me.
강사 첨삭
No wonder your wife would tell you that you are such a good father and husband. This is one proof, my friend!
I am just glad that though you cannot avoid having some kind of fight or misunderstanding with your wife, you do not let it last long. This is really good not only for you but also for the rest of your family, especially your daughter. You never want her to see you and your wife arguing about petty things, don\'t you?
Keep your relations strong, James!
I hope you and your wife would stay open to each other.
Thanks for sharing! I am truly inspired by your story.
Have a good one, James!
-Klein-
Can you smooth everything over after a fight with a loved one and act like things are all good?==> In my case, I cannot hide my look after I fight with my wife.>>Correct
So it is very difficult to act like things are all good.>>Correct
My face is stiff and I shut up my mouth and stop talking with her after fighting.>>My face is stiff; I shut up, and stop talking with her after fighting.
>>My face would remain stiff, so I shut my mouth. I stop talking with her after our fight.
My wife also doesn\'t tell me but she tells a lot with another people.
>>My wife also doesn\'t talk to me but she talks about it with another person.
>>My wife also doesn\'t talk to me but she talks about it with other people.That makes me angry. So I also do same action with my wife.>>That makes me angry, so I also do the same action as my wife.We don\'t talk each other during one or two days.>>We don\'t talk to each other for one to two days.
After that day, I always give up to my wife.>>After that, I always give in to my wife.
I think when I give up it is for me and it keeps my family.>>I think, when I give in, it is for me as it keeps my family.Anyway I try to reduce fighting with my wife and live interestingly with my family.>>Anyway, I try to reduce fights with my wife and live interestingly with my family.
It is more helpful to me.
>>Correct!
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