homework

Dear [이름],

An awesome Thursday to you and to your loved ones! ^.^

To start, I would like to thank you for writing! ^^

I am happy that you share your ideas willingly through writing.

Just keep on making compositions! ^^,

In no time, you will see that there are improvements on your side.

Anyway, happy reading! ^^

See you in class! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reason and examples to develop your essay.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

I agree.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I agree to the statement.

It\'s because, children can experience much in the countryside than a big city.

>> It\'s because children can experience much in the countryside than in a big city.

And they can live there life without internet games, etc.

>> In addition, they can live their lives without internet games and others.

It because, there are so many things to do except for them.

>> It is because there are so many things that they can do except playing games online.

So countryside is better to childeren\'s living.

>> Therefore, the countryside is better for children\'s living.