Homework

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... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

I think living longer is nice phenomenon.

>> I think living longer is a nice phenomenon.

It\'s because they can spend more time with their lovers, and they can spend there rest of time to enjoy what they wanted to do.

>> It\'s because people can spend more time with their lovers, and they can spend the rest of their time enjoying what they want to do.

But it\'s not a settle down phenomenon, so oldest people still need to do work for their family, or themselves yet.

>> However, it\'s not a permanent phenomenon, so old people still need to work for their families or themselves also.

They have a right to enjoy their life, but the situation don\'t let them stand.

>> They have right to enjoy their lives, but the situation doesn\'t let them stand.

So goverment should make some rules of welfare for the aged.

>> Therefore, the government should make some rules in relation to the welfare of the aged.