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2017-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Nowadays, online classes are turning out to be more and more practiced. Online learning represents an easy and comfortable method to achieve knowledge in almost every field. Online learning can not offer human interaction. Competition between colleagues can be very stimulating and students will only benefit from it. Additionally, online courses can not cope with thousands of students that try to join discussion, practice and group activities. However, I think taking online classes must be a positive development. Online classes can be a great alternative to traditional learning, especially for people who can't afford the time and money to take real courses. Also, online learning can endlessly offer students the same lectures until they are practiced and as long as they want. What's more, online classes are so effective that students could chase two hares at once, which are studying and working. Moreover, online classes could be great chances for lifelong learning for adults. In conclusion, online classes should be seen as one of the most effective ways to complement and extend classical forms of learning along with the progress of digital technologies.

강사 첨삭

 The Internet, otherwise known as \"information highway\" has provided a lot of possibilities.

For instance, people all over the world can learn without even leaving their home.

I am so happy that through this kind of job, I could have a lot of opportunities to meet wonderful people like you, Sir :)

Nowadays, online classes are turning out to be more and more practiced.

>>CORRECT!
 Online learning represents an easy and comfortable method to achieve knowledge in almost every field.

>>CORRECT!
 Online learning can not offer human interaction.

>>CORRECT!
 Competition between colleagues can be very stimulating and students will only benefit from it.

>>CORRECT!
 Additionally, online courses can not cope with thousands of students that try to join discussion, practice and group activities.

>>CORRECT!
 However, I think taking online classes must be a positive development.

>>CORRECT!
 Online classes can be a great alternative to traditional learning, especially for people who can\'t afford the time and money to take real courses. 

>>CORRECT!
 Also, online learning can endlessly offer students the same lectures until they are practiced and as long as they want.

>>CORRECT!
 What\'s more, online classes are so effective that students could chase two hares at once, which are studying and working.

>>CORRECT!
 Moreover, online classes could be great chances for lifelong learning for adults.

>>CORRECT!
 In conclusion, online classes should be seen as one of the most effective ways to complement and extend classical forms of learning along with the progress of digital technologies.

>>CORRECT!



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