HOMEWORK
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강사 첨삭
The Internet, otherwise known as \"information highway\" has provided a lot of possibilities.
For instance, people all over the world can learn without even leaving their home.
I am so happy that through this kind of job, I could have a lot of opportunities to meet wonderful people like you, Sir :)
Nowadays, online classes are turning out to be more and more practiced.
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Online learning represents an easy and comfortable method to achieve knowledge in almost every field.
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Online learning can not offer human interaction.
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Competition between colleagues can be very stimulating and students will only benefit from it.
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Additionally, online courses can not cope with thousands of students that try to join discussion, practice and group activities.
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However, I think taking online classes must be a positive development.
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Online classes can be a great alternative to traditional learning, especially for people who can\'t afford the time and money to take real courses.
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Also, online learning can endlessly offer students the same lectures until they are practiced and as long as they want.
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What\'s more, online classes are so effective that students could chase two hares at once, which are studying and working.
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Moreover, online classes could be great chances for lifelong learning for adults.
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In conclusion, online classes should be seen as one of the most effective ways to complement and extend classical forms of learning along with the progress of digital technologies.
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