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2017-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: *CREATIVE WRITING: We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important. REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun. I think most important characteristics of a co-worker is consideration. It's because, the situation of many people in the same places definetely cause disagree and fight surroundings. If people consider each other's think, the quality of work would be improve, and everyone would be happier than previous days.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A terrific Thursday night again! ^.^


Let me take this chance to express my gratitude to you by saying thank you. ^^

Hahaha! ^^,

I am just kidding! ^^.


Well, honestly, I am so glad to read all of your compositions.

Thanks a lot! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^,


See you very soon! ^^


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~



HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

I think most important characteristics of a co-worker is consideration.

>> I think the most important characteristic a co-worker should have is consideration.

It\'s because, the situation of many people in the same places definetely cause disagree and fight surroundings.

>> It\'s because the situation of many people in the same place definitely causes disagreements and fights.

If people consider each other\'s think, the quality of work would be improve, and everyone would be happier than previous days.

>> If people consider each other\'s ideas and opinions, the quality of work will improve, and everyone will be happier than previous days. 

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