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2017-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. one-eyed a giant treasure guarded the > A giant one-eyed guarded the treasure. 2. are the up powers piling arms nuclear >The arms are piling powers up unclear. 3. question an the important be will discussed at meeting >The important qeustion will be disscussed at an meeting. 4. people audience began some among to leave the > Some people began to leave the audience. 5. one was men of the three in car injured the > Men was injured one of the three car.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Great job!!!
I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need. You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny

1. one-eyed a giant treasure guarded the
> A giant one-eyed guarded the treasure.
>>A one-eyed giant guarded the treasure.
2. are the up powers piling arms nuclear
> The arms are piling powers up unclear.
>>The nuclear powers are piling up arms.
3. question an the important be will discussed at meeting
> The important qeustion will be disscussed at an meeting.
>>An important question will be discussed at the meeting.
4. people audience began some among to leave the
> Some people began to leave the audience.
>>Some people among the audience began to leave.
5. one was men of the three in car injured the
> Men was injured one of the three car.
>>One of the three men in the car was injured.

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