Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
An awesome Friday to you! ^.^
First and foremost, I would like to say, \"I agree with you! \" Furthermore, I think what you were trying to say is that men lie because they avoid hurting anyone. Correct me if I\'m wrong. ^^
Anyway, thank you for a great composition that you made! ^^, However, I want you to write more creatively. Try to use different sentence patterns.
Well, that\'s all for today! ^^ Have a wonderful Friday! ^^, Enjoy an awesome weekend! ^^. See you on Monday! ^.^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.
I think truth is not always good.
>> I think telling the truth is not always good.
Sometimes we need to tell white lies to people.
>> Sometimes, we need to tell white lies to people.
And there are something that are better not to listen.
>> In addition, there are some things that are better left unsaid.
These things are one of the consideration.
>> These things are some of the considerations.
If everyone always tell the truth, someone could get hurt, feel anyhow.
>> If everyone always tells the truth, someone could get hurt or feel something anyhow.
So I think sometimes we need not to tel the truth in our life.
>> Therefore, I think we sometimes need not to tell the truth.
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