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2017-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: *CREATIVE WRITING: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun. I think truth is not always good. Sometimes we need to tell white lies to people. And there are something that are better not to listen. These things are one of the consideration. If everyone always tell the truth, someone could get hurt, feel anyhow. So I think sometimes we need not to tel the truth in our life.

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name],


          An awesome Friday to you! ^.^


          First and foremost, I would like to say, \"I agree with you! \" Furthermore, I think what you were trying to say is that men lie because they avoid hurting anyone. Correct me if I\'m wrong. ^^


          Anyway, thank you for a great composition that you made! ^^, However, I want you to write more creatively. Try to use different sentence patterns.


          Well, that\'s all for today! ^^ Have a wonderful Friday! ^^, Enjoy an awesome weekend! ^^. See you on Monday! ^.^


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~



HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.


I think truth is not always good.

>> I think telling the truth is not always good.

Sometimes we need to tell white lies to people.

>> Sometimes, we need to tell white lies to people.

And there are something that are better not to listen.

>> In addition, there are some things that are better left unsaid.

These things are one of the consideration.

>> These things are some of the considerations.

If everyone always tell the truth, someone could get hurt, feel anyhow.

>> If everyone always tells the truth, someone could get hurt or feel something anyhow.

So I think sometimes we need not to tel the truth in our life.

>> Therefore, I think we sometimes need not to tell the truth.

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