HOMEWORK
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강사 첨삭
Good morning, Sir!
Do you remember the movie \"Terminator?\"
Oh my, it really scares me when I imagine that robots could outsmart people TT
However, news about Rookie never fails to put a smile on my face :)
Having pets is sometimes annoying, but the happiness they bring is incomparable^^
Thank you for writing this paragraph and have a great Monday!
Robots continue to infiltrate our homes, simplifying the most annoying household chores and freeing up users\' time.
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Since we have been living with Rookie, my wife has had to clean the floor several times a day because of a lot of his hair.
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So my son bought LG home-robotic vacuum cleaner for his mom last year, which costed about 700 dollars.
>>So my son bought an LG home-robotic vacuum cleaner for his mom last year, which costed (or cost) about 700 dollars.
One of the most difficult problems is Rookie\'s hindrance derived from his curiosity.
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Whenever operating it, my wife always struggle with him who chases, blocks, or touches it with his forefoot.
>> Whenever operating it, my wife always struggles with him who chases, blocks, or touches it with his forefoot.
According to some reports, the latest home robot has a touchscreen face which allows it to emote, while speakers allow it to respond to voice commands and have a chat.
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It can keep an eye on older people and alert carers in case of accidents.
>> It can keep an eye on older people and alert caregivers or attendants in case of accidents.
Right now, home robots are not that beneficial as home assistants because they need human\'s assists.
>>Right now, home robots are not that beneficial as home assistants because they need humans.
However, I\'m sure that the science-fiction could turn into the science-fact in the near future and robots will be way beneficial as home assistants.
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