Homework
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When do you usually act incongruously?
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In my case, I try to maintain the consistency when I work in the company.
If I cannot keep the consistency it is hard to work, because my colleagues don't believe me when something is occurred.
But in my home, I sometimes act incongruously because my emotion is ahead of intellect.
I say my son to do something freely because he is an adult man.
But if he is playing a game, I always nag him playing games.
And I interfere what he does at home. How about go to bed early, Why don't you stay in living room with us. etc...
It is something that I have to fix it and I act incongruously.
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When do you usually act incongruously?==> In my case, I try to maintain the consistency when I work in the company.
>>CorrectIf I cannot keep the consistency it is hard to work, because my colleagues don\'t believe me when something is occurred.
>>If I cannot keep the consistency, it is hard to work, because my colleagues won\'t believe me when something has occurred.But in my home, I sometimes act incongruously because my emotion is ahead of intellect.>>Correct
I say my son to do something freely because he is an adult man.>>I tell my son to do something freely because he is an adult.
>>I tell my son to do something freely because he is a young man.
But if he is playing a game, I always nag him playing games.>>But if he is playing a game, I always nag at him.
And I interfere what he does at home.
>>And I interfere with what he does at home.
How about go to bed early, Why don\'t you stay in living room with us. etc...>>I would say, \"How about going to bed early? Why don\'t you stay in the living room with us? etc.\"
It is something that I have to fix it and I act incongruously.
>>It is something that I have to fix, so I won\'t act incongruously.
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